This was incredible! I love how the opening gives Kavya's surroundings such menace, which contrasts so wonderfully with the ending. I really loved 'as though the gods themselves had wept blood into the air'. And the idea of the river as a collector of stories was incredibly beautiful.
Thank you for taking the time to read, and noticing that description. I dedicate a lot of time to dissecting emotions and navigating imaginary worlds to find the right words to capture a scene. It's a challenging process, as I’m sure you know, being a writer yourself.
This was incredible! I love how the opening gives Kavya's surroundings such menace, which contrasts so wonderfully with the ending. I really loved 'as though the gods themselves had wept blood into the air'. And the idea of the river as a collector of stories was incredibly beautiful.
Thank you for taking the time to read, and noticing that description. I dedicate a lot of time to dissecting emotions and navigating imaginary worlds to find the right words to capture a scene. It's a challenging process, as I’m sure you know, being a writer yourself.
Beautifully written story. Thank you for sharing your talent. You really do amaze me. Please keep writing. 💝🍒
Thank you dear Cherry 🫶🏻